These are looking pretty cool! there's good stuff with each of these. The base shape of 1 is really nice and bold - though i think the top bridge area feels a bit tacked on at the moment and could feel more integrated. Same goes for the rings on both this design and all of them - think about how they crash into the designs and how they're 'held' in place. 2 and 3 both have some nice layering and breakup that feels really cool and is starting to have a nice directional feel in 3. Be sure to organize some of those forms in the back mid section behind the wings as they look a little abstract at the moment. I also like how 3's large circle crown is less of an awkwardly over large element unlike in the other ones in which i find it a bit distracting. Carry on!
Hey Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThese are looking pretty cool! there's good stuff with each of these. The base shape of 1 is really nice and bold - though i think the top bridge area feels a bit tacked on at the moment and could feel more integrated. Same goes for the rings on both this design and all of them - think about how they crash into the designs and how they're 'held' in place. 2 and 3 both have some nice layering and breakup that feels really cool and is starting to have a nice directional feel in 3. Be sure to organize some of those forms in the back mid section behind the wings as they look a little abstract at the moment. I also like how 3's large circle crown is less of an awkwardly over large element unlike in the other ones in which i find it a bit distracting. Carry on!