- Some on the first page might be sticking a bit too close to some of your reference but it feels like you're starting to hit on some cool ideas on your second page! The engine shapes of 9 and the unusual bottom shape of 8 feel pretty cool. It does kind of feel like you lose steam around 12 on as the shapes get less defined and more blobby.
If you were to continue on with either 7 or 9, here are some suggestions: - push and pull the forms of 8 more - especially the wings. Think of creating a bold top down shape while designing the 3/4 view that is cool and iconic. - For 9 - the side engine pieces are looking cool but the fuselage could use some work as its looking a bit blah. Try some interesting forms that could complement the side shapes in an interesting way. The fanning pieces at the back also look super cool and could reappear elsewhere in the design too. Carry on!
Good start Angie!
ReplyDelete- Some on the first page might be sticking a bit too close to some of your reference but it feels like you're starting to hit on some cool ideas on your second page! The engine shapes of 9 and the unusual bottom shape of 8 feel pretty cool. It does kind of feel like you lose steam around 12 on as the shapes get less defined and more blobby.
If you were to continue on with either 7 or 9, here are some suggestions:
- push and pull the forms of 8 more - especially the wings. Think of creating a bold top down shape while designing the 3/4 view that is cool and iconic.
- For 9 - the side engine pieces are looking cool but the fuselage could use some work as its looking a bit blah. Try some interesting forms that could complement the side shapes in an interesting way. The fanning pieces at the back also look super cool and could reappear elsewhere in the design too. Carry on!
Thanks for the feedback Sean ! I'll push the 2 sketches you mentioned and keep exploring more !
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