These are looking pretty cool! Remember what I said during my demo of introducing some straight edges and more artificial looking forms - these could still use some more of that. The silhouettes though are looking super cool and there's a ton of possibilties to pursue here. I'd actually recommend doing another pass over these to explore more of the interior forms as right now there's too much wavy organicness. 1,2,4 and 6 stand out to me as the coolest so far. I'd say polish these ones up with some more obvious material breakup and explorations of the interior forms/details. Carry on!
Thanks for the feedback ! I updated the post with some, hopefully, more polished and more interesting shapes for the sketches 1,2,4 and 6 :) Will keep working !
Hey Angeline,
ReplyDeleteThese are looking pretty cool! Remember what I said during my demo of introducing some straight edges and more artificial looking forms - these could still use some more of that. The silhouettes though are looking super cool and there's a ton of possibilties to pursue here. I'd actually recommend doing another pass over these to explore more of the interior forms as right now there's too much wavy organicness. 1,2,4 and 6 stand out to me as the coolest so far. I'd say polish these ones up with some more obvious material breakup and explorations of the interior forms/details. Carry on!
Hey Sean,
DeleteThanks for the feedback ! I updated the post with some, hopefully, more polished and more interesting shapes for the sketches 1,2,4 and 6 :) Will keep working !