Friday, November 20, 2020

CaraS Week07

 Hey Sean!

I wasn't able to progress much this week on the ship so far, I adjusted it based on the feedback but I haven't yet been able to add details to it.




I tried to start some sketches for the magic sword prop:




Sorry about the lack of good work this week, I'm going to try to progress more before class.

Update: 

More swords (and blades)







4 comments:

  1. Hi Cara,

    Progress is looking good on the environment and continued rendering of the ship - keep it up!

    For the swords - these are all looking super cool - my favorites are 1-3 and 6. Don't have too much to say about these as there's lots of really good variety - carry on!

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    1. Thanks Sean! I'll keep working on the ship and on some more sword designs

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  2. OUuuu i'm digging the progress on the swords - these are looking pretty wild! I'd actually recommend being a bit careful about how you're structuring some of them as some are feel pretty imbalanced to hold (and too visually even) like in #1 and 3. 2 also feels pretttyyy heavy (along with 1 and 3). Try to think about integrating these cool elements more rather than them being pretty segmented - 1 and 3 suffer from this quite a bit and it would be neat if for 1 the blade was overall more fungal or like the stamen of a flower and 3 more pine cone like throughout. Something about the shape languages for 5 might be a bitttt too close to the vase with the shapes literally translating over a bit too much. Great shapes and explorations though! Keep it up! Also the Klingon bat'leth of #4!

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    1. Thanks again Sean! I'll try to fix those things and add some more options

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