CaraS Week05

Update: Tried making adjustments. For the bottom one, I was thinking of maybe showing the Horned King coming off the ship to connect multiple elements of my IP together. The first one already connects since it's flying next to the castle. I'm not too sure which thumbnail would be better to go with

 Hi Sean! I tried some thumbnails for the keyframe:

FEEDBACK:

I REALLY like these! maybe flip and shrink the second one - not such a fan of the first one as it doesn't feel super dynamic - the 3rd one is close... i'd maybe add some hills possibly and adjust the placement of the closest wing to being closer to us? could also be a tighter crop and shift the ground up a bit in the background maybe.

FEEDBACK 2:

Nice! these are looking better! i did another quick paintover possibly to add a terrace where to add more breakup to the building in 1 and you can throw some people in there.  Its placement may have to be adjusted but it might help a bit!  Also possibly but the guy in the foreground of 2 on a hill so there isn't some sizing weirdness and throw back those figures in coming out of the vehicle.