Here's a few quick possible notes: - maybe give a bit of a curve to some of the details especially on the back circle on the edges - as right now they're reading a bit flat - for the side and top view orthographics really reduce the detail of those as they're reading more as a grunge texture at the moment - Try and give more depth variation to the shapes at the front. The area has a cool silhouette but currently is reading like a flat extrusion. Cut into those gold shapes and have some areas get thinner/thicker - I'm not totally sold on the length indicators at the bottom as they don't really make sense with the ship being in 3/4 view. Maybe check out the pattern you'd see on old Apollo missions with the + shape pattern: https://www.sciencenews.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/07/070619_mt_moon-stuff_feat.jpg - For the side pod at the back, give the gold circles some more breakup as its REALLY big and solid at the moment. - Experiment with how you could more clearly separate the bottom arm of the ship from the side as they're combining together in this view. - highlights on the green area petal shapes is looking weird - maybe tone it down and make it more matte. - the grey details on the inside of the arms could be more interesting rather than just a long rectangle mirroring the outside shape.
This is looking nice Mounash!
ReplyDeleteHere's a few quick possible notes:
- maybe give a bit of a curve to some of the details especially on the back circle on the edges - as right now they're reading a bit flat
- for the side and top view orthographics really reduce the detail of those as they're reading more as a grunge texture at the moment
- Try and give more depth variation to the shapes at the front. The area has a cool silhouette but currently is reading like a flat extrusion. Cut into those gold shapes and have some areas get thinner/thicker
- I'm not totally sold on the length indicators at the bottom as they don't really make sense with the ship being in 3/4 view. Maybe check out the pattern you'd see on old Apollo missions with the + shape pattern: https://www.sciencenews.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/07/070619_mt_moon-stuff_feat.jpg
- For the side pod at the back, give the gold circles some more breakup as its REALLY big and solid at the moment.
- Experiment with how you could more clearly separate the bottom arm of the ship from the side as they're combining together in this view.
- highlights on the green area petal shapes is looking weird - maybe tone it down and make it more matte.
- the grey details on the inside of the arms could be more interesting rather than just a long rectangle mirroring the outside shape.
Hope that helps! Carry on!
- Drive plume is cool.