Hey Sean! I've been chipping away at this piece, and I'm mostly struggling with painting the ship xD Now that I have the majority of the background painted I'm going to try and find more references and focus on the ship
This is looking really nice! For this ship it'll just be a matter of tightening it up further - some of the linework is coming across a little wobbly and is materials like the gold/bronze trim are inconsistently sized (too organic on long straight areas). - Give it some nice bounce light from the grass - watch out for areas lining up like the bottom right of the ball with the wing breakup. - material of the blue/bronze is feeling a bit weird and artificial - avoid the harsh white blow outs maybe and try for something a bit subtler possibly. - maybe give the people grabber cords more of a sag to their positioning - i feel like for the lines overall with both the ship and the character that you need to decide if you want to keep them or not - they're a bit messy at the moment and i'd say it would be fine to keep them on the character but nice if you'd be able to eliminate them on the ship if possible (just my opinion!) so it could look like an animation cell frame.
Hey Cara,
ReplyDeleteThis is looking really nice! For this ship it'll just be a matter of tightening it up further - some of the linework is coming across a little wobbly and is materials like the gold/bronze trim are inconsistently sized (too organic on long straight areas).
- Give it some nice bounce light from the grass
- watch out for areas lining up like the bottom right of the ball with the wing breakup.
- material of the blue/bronze is feeling a bit weird and artificial - avoid the harsh white blow outs maybe and try for something a bit subtler possibly.
- maybe give the people grabber cords more of a sag to their positioning
- i feel like for the lines overall with both the ship and the character that you need to decide if you want to keep them or not - they're a bit messy at the moment and i'd say it would be fine to keep them on the character but nice if you'd be able to eliminate them on the ship if possible (just my opinion!) so it could look like an animation cell frame.
Thanks Sean, I'll keep working on it! I'll probably eliminate the line art on the ship, I agree that it's looking a bit sloppy at the moment
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